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Stephanie Sweeney's avatar

Twisted!

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Patricia J.L. 👻🧶🖊️'s avatar

Oh, that was creepy and that end line is brilliant.

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Honeygloom's avatar

Ahhh!! I want more! I feel like this could be a whole book. Well done!

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Bri Heron's avatar

Thank you! Might need to make it into one 😊

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Honeygloom's avatar

That would be awesome!

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V Kelly-Sibley's avatar

oooooh, great short story.

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Bri Heron's avatar

Thank you!!

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Kathrine Elaine's avatar

Chilling! You should share it with the folks of Macabre Monday here on Substack!

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Bri Heron's avatar

Thanks for the idea! I’m going to start posting more now, thanks 😊

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