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Twisted!

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Oh, that was creepy and that end line is brilliant.

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Apr 9Liked by Bri Heron

Ahhh!! I want more! I feel like this could be a whole book. Well done!

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Thank you! Might need to make it into one 😊

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Apr 9Liked by Bri Heron

That would be awesome!

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oooooh, great short story.

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Thank you!!

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Chilling! You should share it with the folks of Macabre Monday here on Substack!

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Thanks for the idea! I’m going to start posting more now, thanks 😊

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